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Gilbert Cranberg: Beware of the Commingled Notes

Posted at 10:19 am, July 11th, 2008
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When journalists are caught recycling material, a frequently-heard explanation is that they commingled notes – that is, they copied passages they admired, put them in their files and then, in the course of writing a story, mistook the borrowed work for their own.

This is essentially what Michael E. O’Neill, nominated by President Bush for a federal District Court judgeship, says is how he came to publish several articles that included material taken, without credit or attribution, virtually verbatim from other sources. O’Neill told the New York Times that he “blamed a poor work method.” The Times quoted him to the effect that he often mingled research materials and his own work in a single computer file. “‘I didn’t keep appropriate track of things,” said O’Neill. “I frankly did a poor and negligent job.’”

Commingled notes again, but with the added twist of being aided and abetted by a computer.

O’Neill’s description of his work habits recalls the extreme case of commingled notes by a Miami News sports writer, Tom Archdeacon, who faced loss of an ASNE writing award in the 1980s for an entry in which somebody else’s work found its way into his copy. Archdeacon confessed that, when he wrote the prize-winning story, he had mixed up more than a “hundred note pages, napkins, scraps of paper, a few things on a matchbook cover and even a few ideas written on the palm of my hand.”

ASNE’s board of directors deplored “that such gross carelessness and sloppiness could be part of the working procedure of such a talented writer,” but concluded that, all things considered, Archdeacon’s mistaken use of another’s phrasing was a “journalistic misdemeanor and not a felony.”

Professional writers are likely to be suspicious, with reason, of claims that a writer mistook somebody else’s language for his own. Writers don’t just string random words and thoughts together. The thinking that goes into writing is part of a creative process that makes each work distinctive – and readily recognizable to the author.

The work O’Neill passed off as his included dense passages hard for anyone not to recognize as someone else’s thinking. Moreover, O’Neill edited, and improved, some wording, a process that should have triggered reminders that the work isn’t familiar.

Journalists routinely are disciplined, and often fired, for plagiarism. The standards for a lifetime position on the federal bench ought to be at least as stringent as those for working on a newspaper. The multiple examples of what look like copying by O’Neill obligate Senators who vote on his nomination to be absolutely certain that he is guilty of being nothing more than slipshod.



2 Responses to “Beware of the Commingled Notes”

  1. Debbie says:

    I find it impossible to believe that a person who is required to write copious notes to get through law school, Tens of thousands of notes as a practicing lawyer and even more as a judge wouldn’t know what bits he wrote and what bits somebody else wrote. And if his excuse is true, that he was lax on his work method, then what kind of lifetime jugde would he be? A person develops a method of working early in life that includes the same habits, good and bad, that will most likely be a part of that person forever. I know my work met hods and ethic were forged in my early 20′s and still rely on them. No. I don’t believe it was mere accident. Once a plageris…as they say.

  2. Carolita says:

    The willful suspension of disbelief required to accept O’Neill’s lame excuse would be a Herculean endeavor indeed. It may be possible for someone who has had experience using his “method,” but few people who have done acutal research will be able — or willing — to make that leap of faith.

    Like Mr. O’Neill, I frequently “clip” material from different Internet files and comingle them in a common topic-based file, typically named (Topic) Research Notes. And sometimes that file will contain notes I write — ideas for further research, etc. — clearly bracketed off by lines and in a different color. However, that file ALWAYS contains the author, title, URL and date acquired for EACH clip, pasted at the beginning of each clip. After all, what good are notes for research if you can’t cite the source?

    Well, maybe if you never intended to cite the source that would be a productive work habit. I think this particular work habit — and his attempt to glibly dismiss it — speaks more to the quality of O’Neill’s character than the quality of his writing.

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